Kind Of Cruel, A Faster Fate

August 8, 2013

It’s  as  if

A faster plan

To implement

Into place…

Could only prove

Kind of cruel.


As, Exact


Details don’t fail to play out

More or less  Exact

To all the timetable.


If I’d take the deal

& took the step up  to take the hook,

& hang on to the thing,

Swang around wild corners,

On way to the fire

I wouldn’t fight.

If I would  ignite this one,

Shifting  Love’s  Attention.


4 Responses to “Kind Of Cruel, A Faster Fate”

  1. Tom G said

    raw and awesome

  2. I’m not sure if this is applicable, but your poem made me think of this idea I raised yesterday: Is it cruel to ask someone only to eat your cooking, then to not prepare them any food?

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