SOME STOICISM/ (3) “Stoic”

January 25, 2012

I  contend

I can maintain  mainly steady motion,

As a  seastorm wreck  under ocean.

I’ll  extend

My hand humanely.  Mainly obligation.

I must offer up, against the grain,

To dare offer  heart,

That light  from a slat

In a self-styled safe cell that

Will spill and splash

On  still quite a quiet crash scene again.


3 Responses to “SOME STOICISM/ (3) “Stoic””

  1. great flow and intricate, new rhythm, rhyme scheme of your own creation

  2. dantrewear said

    “quite a quiet crash scene” – a brilliant image to fit the subject matter
    peace. –D

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