ballerinas and mermaids

December 9, 2011

“I love when dreams are made up of..

all about

ballerinas & mermaids.”  of

Grace  and  magic/

.

Faiths  have  this.

And though dreams & these dogmas

won’t seem to refresh those of us,

they don’t refuse to redeem  for some,

it seems, for some.

 

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3 Responses to “ballerinas and mermaids”

  1. Love this! I dream of Mermaids all the time. 🙂 Great structure & rhythm.

  2. The title is seductive…and the verse graceful and magical!

    Thank you for visiting my blog and liking my post: ‘Dawn Speaks’.

  3. dantrewear said

    Second stanza is classic brilliant. Wonderful stuff.

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