July 26, 2011

There’s  this  Delores

At a fire, down the dunes

I can see this far

from up here

They like talking about her

By her name, while she’s there

Then, when she decides

To add another take to the fire

Her sound is sure

Though her hair is in her eyes

And on her red sweater

She’ not yet pure enough

to sense

I long for her  here

Forty  years  on


2 Responses to “RED SWEATER”

  1. Evelyn said

    Im not 100% sure what it means and thats WHY I love it
    your dreamy style keeps me coming back again and again.
    my only wish is for more more more of these words you make like prayers thru fairy eyes…

  2. I think I know her, although she is not called Dolores in my memory

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